Kindred Spirits
Working to publish Kindred Spirits looking for beta readers. Its a rough draft so not looking for grammar or spelling just thots on overall story. Interested then reply to post or inbox me on goodreads. Its an adult paranormal story, with werewolves. Its the first draft as well so when its all said and done cud vary a lot. Cheers have a good day.
Heroine - Grace doesn't know she is a werewolf. Kept at bay due to panic attacks she had as a child and her father put her on medication. Starts having erotic dreams about a man she never met before then she meets him and learns what they are and who she is. An old friend who was her first love returns just as she learns about her true self only to learn that he is one also and he had known she was different.
Alpha - Logan self made millionaire looking for a mate.
Beta - Andrew Logan right hand man since college. doesn't know that Logan has his sights on Grace his one true love.
Alice is Grace's Manager owns her own art gallery and he love interest of one of he pack members Greg.
the rest of the pack is Max, David, Tyler and Luke
Graham is the villian along with his right hand man Tommasso as vile as they come.
Graham wants Logan's empire and Logan wants Grace to be
alpha female so they can become a stronger pack with an unbreakable bond, only Grace and Andrew don't know that is his plan until they come face to face for the first time in ten years.
Grace and Andrews connections grows strong the closer they are but Andrew is the beta and must not disobey his alpha unless he plans to challenge him and win. Graham decides to stir things up and take what they both want. Grace, he will use her a leverage in every way he can even if it means turning her against them.
Again this is a very rough draft, what i am looking for ONLY is story flow and the overall story itself. what should i remove or add or add more of. Should there be more sex and more explicit or tamer?
Thanks ahead of time cant wait to hear from you all.
Sabrina Ross
